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Please Grade this Issue Task
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15 Apr 2018, 06:57
15 Apr 2018, 06:57
Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
In this world full of sugar-coated speeches and empty smiles, scandals are the devious ways which often bring out the truth of events which have been occurring since years or maybe decades. According to lexicons, scandals are acts which are morally wrong or against the law which unleash public outrage. Considering the bigger picture, scandals are the born out of immoral acts and are not useful to focus our attention on problems of the society. Scandals lead to bigger problems than they bring focus to.
Speakers and reformers advocate for the public good. They are the motivation of many and help maintain harmony in the society. In the strive to spread positive values and vibes, scandals work absolutely against this ideology. They unleash public rage and hinder quotidian life. Students often go on strikes after scandals gain the limelight. Shops and factories are closed down temporarily. A single scandal can disrupt the entire normal functioning of the society. People fail to trust the present system of Government at times which is a state of emergency for the nation. To lose faith in the Government that the people had voted for is detrimental as it will impede progress of the nation as a whole. Individuals who were once revered and treated as role-models are often involved in such scandals. This leaves an indelible mark on youngsters. Teenagers often need motivation to work and a role model to believe in. When their role models are involved in immoral acts, they start questioning the fundamentals and duties of a human being. All-in-all, scandals lead to questioning of the moral and ethical values which men and women are ought to follow without any exemption. For example, consider the President of a nation wins the elections with the main propaganda that he or she is determined to eradicate corruption from the face of the nation. Later, it is brought to light that the President has been involved in a scandal involving a sum of 100 million dollars. This will cause the opposition to stand up against the present system along with the people of the nation in the eyes of who he or she has failed.
Chain reactions are not only confined to Nuclear Fission reactions in Chemistry but also caused when a scandal is brought to light. It has been observed that one scandal which surfaces has many heads like the Hydra. Over time, it spreads it roots deep into the system and society. Thus an initial scandal leads to many more eventually and involves many people weakened by cupidity or love for power. Many innocent but talented individuals who have faint idea about the scandal are also pulled into this web of scandals who finally turn out to be evil masterminds when they could have been using their skills for the good of the society. For instance, a graduate in Computer Science Engineering might be interested in projects of Data Science and Analysis. Oblivious to the kind of data he or she is working with might in the end produce successful results which will be of paramount importance to the gang involved in the scandal. They might try to hire the Engineer for full-time and if he or she agrees to join without checking their background then the person will unknowingly in the beginning but eventually might give in to work out devious ways to add more to the scandal. All-in-all, one scandal leads to several other more which compound the amount of problems in the society.
Scandals can often give an unambiguous picture about the real scenario of the people in power. The public outrage will be admonitory to the individuals who will hold these positions in the future.
Scandals are acts which cause the naïve general public to feel wronged. To wrong the people who we are supposed to serve is a crime which is beyond punishment. Thus a scandal is not something which a society ever wishes to face.
In this world full of sugar-coated speeches and empty smiles, scandals are the devious ways which often bring out the truth of events which have been occurring since years or maybe decades. According to lexicons, scandals are acts which are morally wrong or against the law which unleash public outrage. Considering the bigger picture, scandals are the born out of immoral acts and are not useful to focus our attention on problems of the society. Scandals lead to bigger problems than they bring focus to.
Speakers and reformers advocate for the public good. They are the motivation of many and help maintain harmony in the society. In the strive to spread positive values and vibes, scandals work absolutely against this ideology. They unleash public rage and hinder quotidian life. Students often go on strikes after scandals gain the limelight. Shops and factories are closed down temporarily. A single scandal can disrupt the entire normal functioning of the society. People fail to trust the present system of Government at times which is a state of emergency for the nation. To lose faith in the Government that the people had voted for is detrimental as it will impede progress of the nation as a whole. Individuals who were once revered and treated as role-models are often involved in such scandals. This leaves an indelible mark on youngsters. Teenagers often need motivation to work and a role model to believe in. When their role models are involved in immoral acts, they start questioning the fundamentals and duties of a human being. All-in-all, scandals lead to questioning of the moral and ethical values which men and women are ought to follow without any exemption. For example, consider the President of a nation wins the elections with the main propaganda that he or she is determined to eradicate corruption from the face of the nation. Later, it is brought to light that the President has been involved in a scandal involving a sum of 100 million dollars. This will cause the opposition to stand up against the present system along with the people of the nation in the eyes of who he or she has failed.
Chain reactions are not only confined to Nuclear Fission reactions in Chemistry but also caused when a scandal is brought to light. It has been observed that one scandal which surfaces has many heads like the Hydra. Over time, it spreads it roots deep into the system and society. Thus an initial scandal leads to many more eventually and involves many people weakened by cupidity or love for power. Many innocent but talented individuals who have faint idea about the scandal are also pulled into this web of scandals who finally turn out to be evil masterminds when they could have been using their skills for the good of the society. For instance, a graduate in Computer Science Engineering might be interested in projects of Data Science and Analysis. Oblivious to the kind of data he or she is working with might in the end produce successful results which will be of paramount importance to the gang involved in the scandal. They might try to hire the Engineer for full-time and if he or she agrees to join without checking their background then the person will unknowingly in the beginning but eventually might give in to work out devious ways to add more to the scandal. All-in-all, one scandal leads to several other more which compound the amount of problems in the society.
Scandals can often give an unambiguous picture about the real scenario of the people in power. The public outrage will be admonitory to the individuals who will hold these positions in the future.
Scandals are acts which cause the naïve general public to feel wronged. To wrong the people who we are supposed to serve is a crime which is beyond punishment. Thus a scandal is not something which a society ever wishes to face.
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15 Apr 2018, 10:43
15 Apr 2018, 10:43
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honestly, your English writing is good but the way you unfold the AWA is almost out of scope.
You do not set clearly why which is which. Neither you set it into paragraphs not is a consistent way
Look here for improvements https://gre.myprepclub.com/forum/greprepcl ... -3426.html
Ask for further assistance.
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17 Jul 2019, 19:51
17 Jul 2019, 19:51
Scandals are caused by people who act out of “GREED". In modern times we have been seeing a lot of scandals happening all over the world irrespective of the scale the scandal is done. Scandals are a huge loss to people and not preferable to society in any manner.
Scandals affect people in a very adverse way. For example, In India, a man named Vijaya Maliya performed a scandal by taking a loan of 1000 crore rupees and now is refusing to pay the money back to the State government of India and the case of Nirav Modi who forged diamonds and sold fake diamonds posing them as real diamonds to thousands of people. What Vijaya Maliya doesn't realise is that the loans are provided by the government by using the money that has been deposited by every common man who can’t get his money back now. A common man might have worked hard and kept saving the hard-earned money to get his money robbed while he loses the will to earn that much again. This will have a devastating effect on the common man mentally. This would certainly cause a loss for the individual.
Scandals have a way of affecting everyone in society. Once a scandal is done, the stock market plummets which in turn affects thousands or rather lakhs of people. People might stop trusting other banks having a fear that the same thing might repeat. Taking the earlier example, now the bank has to regain the loss from the common people. So, it increases tariffs on every service they provide which will affect the common man but not the criminal who performed the scandal.
Scandals like these are sometimes seen as the brilliance of a person or organization behind it. When people are greedy, they tend to go out of their way to get what they want. Such people will be influenced by such scandals and might also try to perform a scandal of their own. Though they don’t realise what happens if they get caught by the authorities.
However, scandals make a very good point. They show the people and the government that there are flaws in a process which are to be fixed. They make the government act on the issue and resolve it that would have taken much greater time to be dealt with if not for the scandal.
Though scandals make a point, Ultimately they cause destruction to the people, society and the criminals who perform them. So I condemn the act of performing scandals.
Scandals affect people in a very adverse way. For example, In India, a man named Vijaya Maliya performed a scandal by taking a loan of 1000 crore rupees and now is refusing to pay the money back to the State government of India and the case of Nirav Modi who forged diamonds and sold fake diamonds posing them as real diamonds to thousands of people. What Vijaya Maliya doesn't realise is that the loans are provided by the government by using the money that has been deposited by every common man who can’t get his money back now. A common man might have worked hard and kept saving the hard-earned money to get his money robbed while he loses the will to earn that much again. This will have a devastating effect on the common man mentally. This would certainly cause a loss for the individual.
Scandals have a way of affecting everyone in society. Once a scandal is done, the stock market plummets which in turn affects thousands or rather lakhs of people. People might stop trusting other banks having a fear that the same thing might repeat. Taking the earlier example, now the bank has to regain the loss from the common people. So, it increases tariffs on every service they provide which will affect the common man but not the criminal who performed the scandal.
Scandals like these are sometimes seen as the brilliance of a person or organization behind it. When people are greedy, they tend to go out of their way to get what they want. Such people will be influenced by such scandals and might also try to perform a scandal of their own. Though they don’t realise what happens if they get caught by the authorities.
However, scandals make a very good point. They show the people and the government that there are flaws in a process which are to be fixed. They make the government act on the issue and resolve it that would have taken much greater time to be dealt with if not for the scandal.
Though scandals make a point, Ultimately they cause destruction to the people, society and the criminals who perform them. So I condemn the act of performing scandals.
