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Rate my issue topic essay
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24 Jun 2020, 17:33
24 Jun 2020, 17:33
People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Man is not a puppet that he will go where the winds go. Behavior is an important part in life. Behavior is like a mirror which reflects one’s true character. Man can shape his character on his own will. Because when there is a will there is a way.
It is said that failure has many excuses. People who can’t change their behavior or bad habits blame the force that they are driven by it. But this not so true. It’s their weakness that they can’t take control of their own. Behavior is very important for someone’s personality. Because it’s the first impression. For example, USA president Barak Obama won the heart of people by his behavior.
Bad behavior is part of life and anyone can change it if he wants. Writer of famous ancient book Ramayana was Balmiki Muni. He was a bandit in his early life but by devotion he became a saint and write book. A person is not a slave of force or nature. He is the architect of his own personality and he should decide what he should be.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Man is not a puppet that he will go where the winds go. Behavior is an important part in life. Behavior is like a mirror which reflects one’s true character. Man can shape his character on his own will. Because when there is a will there is a way.
It is said that failure has many excuses. People who can’t change their behavior or bad habits blame the force that they are driven by it. But this not so true. It’s their weakness that they can’t take control of their own. Behavior is very important for someone’s personality. Because it’s the first impression. For example, USA president Barak Obama won the heart of people by his behavior.
Bad behavior is part of life and anyone can change it if he wants. Writer of famous ancient book Ramayana was Balmiki Muni. He was a bandit in his early life but by devotion he became a saint and write book. A person is not a slave of force or nature. He is the architect of his own personality and he should decide what he should be.
Re: Rate my issue topic essay
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10 Sep 2020, 01:32
10 Sep 2020, 01:32
The question had philopsophical depth which had to be answered with finesse and sophistication. I think you simplified the question way too much. Also, problem is with the gender. The question is talking about people which is gender neutral while you've answered in a male's gaze
