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04 May 2021, 10:02
A well codified essay you've written. However, I would like to suggest following updations to ameliorate the essay-
1. Add examples to your thoughts to make appear more pertinent.
2. Increase the length of the essay. Ofcourse quality over content is preferred but if you're good in coming up with a quality content then why not to make further efforts regarding the content for grade 6.
Wish you all luck for the exams!