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essay evaluation - Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an
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Updated on: 03 Feb 2026, 11:56
Updated on: 03 Feb 2026, 11:56
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Carcass please evaluate my essay
Nsp10 what do you think
Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become
more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or
might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
Humans are social creatures, conscious about their reputation among their friends, family, colleagues etc. Our reputation depends on our personality, at least for the most part, and reputation is what keep us from isolation as we would get the attention enough to maintain our mental sanity. However, the prompt claims that having and maintaining the appeal image has become more important than the truth behind that the image, to which I mostly disagree as the underlying character plays a much more important role than the superficial characteristics. However, I do concede that the public image does play a role to some extent in our daily lives.
One reason for the stance taken is the immense pressure that is inevitably faced by the people by maintaining an appealing image. It often is quite arduous to maintain and affect in order to garner attention. A good example can be for this is Amber heard, who accused of Johny Dep for abuse. Amber heard had an immense appeal to her as an actress with the good personality. Because of this appeal, Johny dep was initially accused to be the one who abused her. Later investigations have revealed that it was Amber heard who was proven to be guilty. Falsely accusing Johny Dep for domestic violence. This example shed a light on how important the true character is to a person and how her appeal threw us off hiding the malicious intent deep inside.
Another reason for this stance is the influence over the people. People often listen to those who are more appealing, particularly the influencers. The influencers online have made it quite clear that the appeal to them has what made them famous and because of it they gain millions of followers. These influencers hold the power to influence the minds of other people, enlighten them or degrade them with ideologies that spurious. Toxic masculinity spread by Andrew Tate Is a good example. Initially he has been touted as the righteous one, enlightening men on how to change their lives to better. He was lauded all over the internet. Later on he revealed his true colours by stealing money from people using crypton scam. Urging his followers to buy his courses which are completely useless. This example reveals how polar opposite a person can be from the inside and from the outside
However, the appeal does play a crucial role in many aspects of our lives. For example, socializing. The perception that we person by looking at a person decides how he or she needs to be treated. Our first impression on others has a great impact. Having a good appeal increases our chances in getting friends, persuading clients in corporate world, garnering votes in the politics. This superficial image that we have can play a pivotal role in deciding our success in many aspects of or lives.
In conclusion, The underlying character of the superficial image plays a much crucial role compared to the out image. The true image is what matters the most as it will save us from predicaments when needed. However, Maintaining outer appeal becomes easy if it reflects out inner true character.
Nsp10 what do you think
Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become
more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or
might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
Humans are social creatures, conscious about their reputation among their friends, family, colleagues etc. Our reputation depends on our personality, at least for the most part, and reputation is what keep us from isolation as we would get the attention enough to maintain our mental sanity. However, the prompt claims that having and maintaining the appeal image has become more important than the truth behind that the image, to which I mostly disagree as the underlying character plays a much more important role than the superficial characteristics. However, I do concede that the public image does play a role to some extent in our daily lives.
One reason for the stance taken is the immense pressure that is inevitably faced by the people by maintaining an appealing image. It often is quite arduous to maintain and affect in order to garner attention. A good example can be for this is Amber heard, who accused of Johny Dep for abuse. Amber heard had an immense appeal to her as an actress with the good personality. Because of this appeal, Johny dep was initially accused to be the one who abused her. Later investigations have revealed that it was Amber heard who was proven to be guilty. Falsely accusing Johny Dep for domestic violence. This example shed a light on how important the true character is to a person and how her appeal threw us off hiding the malicious intent deep inside.
Another reason for this stance is the influence over the people. People often listen to those who are more appealing, particularly the influencers. The influencers online have made it quite clear that the appeal to them has what made them famous and because of it they gain millions of followers. These influencers hold the power to influence the minds of other people, enlighten them or degrade them with ideologies that spurious. Toxic masculinity spread by Andrew Tate Is a good example. Initially he has been touted as the righteous one, enlightening men on how to change their lives to better. He was lauded all over the internet. Later on he revealed his true colours by stealing money from people using crypton scam. Urging his followers to buy his courses which are completely useless. This example reveals how polar opposite a person can be from the inside and from the outside
However, the appeal does play a crucial role in many aspects of our lives. For example, socializing. The perception that we person by looking at a person decides how he or she needs to be treated. Our first impression on others has a great impact. Having a good appeal increases our chances in getting friends, persuading clients in corporate world, garnering votes in the politics. This superficial image that we have can play a pivotal role in deciding our success in many aspects of or lives.
In conclusion, The underlying character of the superficial image plays a much crucial role compared to the out image. The true image is what matters the most as it will save us from predicaments when needed. However, Maintaining outer appeal becomes easy if it reflects out inner true character.
Re: essay evaluation - Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an
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03 Feb 2026, 05:09
03 Feb 2026, 05:09
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**Score Estimate: 3.5 – 4.0**
**Strengths:**
* **Clear Position:** The essay maintains a consistent “mostly disagree” stance throughout.
* **Structure:** The argument is logically organized: Introduction → Reason 1 → Reason 2 → Concession → Conclusion.
* **Relevant Examples:** The use of Amber Heard and Andrew Tate provides contemporary, concrete illustrations of the “image vs. reality” debate.
**Areas for Improvement:**
* **Critical Analysis:** The examples are described effectively, but they need to be more explicitly connected to the prompt’s claim about *contemporary society*. Why does modern society elevate image over substance?
* **Grammar and Syntax:** Several subject–verb agreement errors and typos weaken clarity (e.g., “Johny Dep,” “crypton scam,” “appeal to them has what made them famous”).
* **Vocabulary:** Repeated use of words like “appeal” and “image” limits sophistication. Incorporating more nuanced, GRE-level vocabulary would raise the score.
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**Detailed Feedback**
**1. Analysis of Issue (Logic)**
You effectively include a concession—that image matters for first impressions—which is a key feature of higher-scoring GRE essays. To move toward a **5.0 or 6.0**, you should examine *why* contemporary society prioritizes image. References to social media algorithms, the attention economy, or the speed and volume of information dissemination would demonstrate deeper, more insightful analysis.
**2. Support and Development**
* **Amber Heard Example:** The argument that truth eventually prevailed supports your claim that character outweighs image. However, avoid criminal terminology. Instead of stating she was “proven guilty,” a more precise phrasing would be: *the civil verdict favored Depp, revealing the discrepancy between her public persona and private conduct.*
* **Andrew Tate Example:** This example effectively demonstrates how image can manufacture influence. You correctly identify that his image attracted followers, while the reality of his actions undermined his credibility and authority.
**3. Writing Quality (Word Choice & Grammar)**
Suggested GRE-level vocabulary upgrades:
Word/Phrase Used → Suggested Alternative → Reason
* “keep us from isolation” → **“forestall social alienation”** → More precise and academic
* “threw us off” → **“obfuscated”** → Indicates deliberate or structural lack of clarity
* “reveal his true colours” → **“exposed his underlying duplicity”** → Higher-level diction; “duplicity” signals deceit
* “completely useless” → **“utterly vacuous”** → Conveys lack of substance more formally
* “decides how he or she needs to be treated” → **“dictates social treatment”** → More concise and formal
**Strengths:**
* **Clear Position:** The essay maintains a consistent “mostly disagree” stance throughout.
* **Structure:** The argument is logically organized: Introduction → Reason 1 → Reason 2 → Concession → Conclusion.
* **Relevant Examples:** The use of Amber Heard and Andrew Tate provides contemporary, concrete illustrations of the “image vs. reality” debate.
**Areas for Improvement:**
* **Critical Analysis:** The examples are described effectively, but they need to be more explicitly connected to the prompt’s claim about *contemporary society*. Why does modern society elevate image over substance?
* **Grammar and Syntax:** Several subject–verb agreement errors and typos weaken clarity (e.g., “Johny Dep,” “crypton scam,” “appeal to them has what made them famous”).
* **Vocabulary:** Repeated use of words like “appeal” and “image” limits sophistication. Incorporating more nuanced, GRE-level vocabulary would raise the score.
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**Detailed Feedback**
**1. Analysis of Issue (Logic)**
You effectively include a concession—that image matters for first impressions—which is a key feature of higher-scoring GRE essays. To move toward a **5.0 or 6.0**, you should examine *why* contemporary society prioritizes image. References to social media algorithms, the attention economy, or the speed and volume of information dissemination would demonstrate deeper, more insightful analysis.
**2. Support and Development**
* **Amber Heard Example:** The argument that truth eventually prevailed supports your claim that character outweighs image. However, avoid criminal terminology. Instead of stating she was “proven guilty,” a more precise phrasing would be: *the civil verdict favored Depp, revealing the discrepancy between her public persona and private conduct.*
* **Andrew Tate Example:** This example effectively demonstrates how image can manufacture influence. You correctly identify that his image attracted followers, while the reality of his actions undermined his credibility and authority.
**3. Writing Quality (Word Choice & Grammar)**
Suggested GRE-level vocabulary upgrades:
Word/Phrase Used → Suggested Alternative → Reason
* “keep us from isolation” → **“forestall social alienation”** → More precise and academic
* “threw us off” → **“obfuscated”** → Indicates deliberate or structural lack of clarity
* “reveal his true colours” → **“exposed his underlying duplicity”** → Higher-level diction; “duplicity” signals deceit
* “completely useless” → **“utterly vacuous”** → Conveys lack of substance more formally
* “decides how he or she needs to be treated” → **“dictates social treatment”** → More concise and formal
Re: essay evaluation - Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an
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03 Feb 2026, 11:50
03 Feb 2026, 11:50
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