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Re: Issue Task: Educational institutions should dissuade students... [#permalink]
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ShruthiH1997 wrote:
Carcass wrote:
it is good

However, you should try to expand more the first and the third paragraphs

Moreover, you pose too many questions and few responses to them. Would be better to stick to 3 reasons to develop in the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd paragraphs and then in each of them give specific examples of your reasoning why you agree or NOt with the stem

Hope this helps for improvements


Thank you for the pointers, I'll keep them in mind while practicing further!

Had a couple of clarifications: Do I have to explicitly mention at the end of each paragraph (in different language perhaps) that "this is a reason why I agree/disagree with the statement", or is the negative tone of the paragraph enough to show my stance?
Also, while providing examples do they always have to be real-life examples or personal experiences?

Thank you again for the constructive advice!


In the first statement you point out where you stand: agree or not

Then in the paragraph the examples are in support of your position, made already clear

As for the second question does not matter

Your goal is to write a cogent and well written essay. Erro spelling free and with logic.

They do not care of your examples. Unless they are racist for instance
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