Hello,
First of all, I wouldn't share the content on the forums (better to submit it in the file or something) and you need to protect your text from copying (if it could be in a pdf file).
As far as the text itself is concerned, I'd better avoid using he/she repeatedly. Pay attention to the apostrophe usage in shortened forms and the grammar in the sentence (use an
essay writer's tool for signs usage in texts):
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Suppose a person join a job that he/she doesnt like...
Check the grammar structures here:
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For example, If a student is a found of music and do like computer, and there is a demand of computer jobs in market.
Pay attention to the uppercase letters in the sentences:
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ANd all the people choose the same job in the field and at later point,
In a conclusion, College graduate should choose the job based on their hobbies, interest and expertise.