Re: Argument Analysis - Arctic Deer and its Population
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21 Jul 2020, 16:22
In the argument at hand, the author concludes that the “purported decline in deer population is the result of the” artic deer’s inability to “follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.” The author arrives at what he appears to believe is a strong conclusion based on two key points — the artic deer’s dependence on sea ice to thrive and the recent global warming trends. However, before this argument can be deemed cogent from any perspective, it is imperative that three pieces of evidence be scrupulously evaluated.
Firstly, there is no strong evidence supporting the idea that the “purported decline in deer populations” is directly the result of recent global warming trends, as the author states so confidently. There is a strong possibility that it was not the global warming trend but increase in predators or decrease in food resources that led to the decline in deer populations. In fact, the author sets himself up for criticism since even he, himself, declares that the reports “coincide” with warming trends. Coincidence is not proof of evidence. It is simply coincidence. As the apothegm goes, correlation (or coincidence, in this case) does not imply causation by any means. Due to his lack of evidence to prove that the melting ice is a direct cause of deer decline, his argument is sufficiently weakened. In order to strengthen his point, he would need to eliminate all other alternative causes for a population’s decline.
The second piece of evidence that needs to be bolstered is the vagueness of his terminology. In his argument, the author beings by discussing the artic deer who live on “islands in Canada’s artic regions.” By the end of his tirade, he seems to have swapped his information, as he concludes by discussing the “purportedly declin[ing] deer population” in a general sense. Only an insensible reader would be dense enough to believe an author who is not clear about the fundamentals. Given this discrepancy in definitions, one cannot determine whether the decline in deer populations overall may also have included populations of deer that live in forests or in zoos. Without clarifying such points, the author’s points cannot hold water. To increase his credibility, the author should be offering statistical evidence and population trends on a monthly or yearly basis. Such information would help his points of contention to a great degree.
In conclusion, the author’s reasoning as it stands today is severely flawed for the reasons expounded on above. Without further evidence — perhaps in the form of robust research studies, terminology clarification, and historical population trends — it is impossible to evaluate the soundness of his implied call for action to halt global warming. In fact, it is essential that the two claims be answered lest his claim continue to viewed as pure sophistry at best.