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10 Aug 2017, 07:33
“We can learn more from conflicts than we can from agreements.”
This topic raises controvertial topic whether the conflicts are good when compared with the agreements.
Although, One can state that agreements are more peaceful, but when considered as an over all picture, I will say conflicts are more healthier. The tendency to debate or fight against a particular topic or ideology leads to the development of society or of one self. This struggle leads to expand the thought process and scope of individual and a society. An old, ill outdated process or thought can be only challenged and changed by conflicts or by a revolution.
Firstly, the more we debate, talk on a topic/idea with others, more are more thoughts are expressed which helps us to expand our horizons ie the thoughts which we get to know from others, surely add to our knowledge. Such debates, in turn helps to bring out pros and cons and helps to change ideology for betterment. For example, in sixteen century, Copernicus challenged the notion that earth in the center of the solar system. Although he had to pay the price socialy and political for such scientifically audacious statment, but then eventually the truth came forward which led to change in thoughts of people. Since he challenged the old and wrong notion, this mistaken belief was broken.
Secondly, the outdated old political ideas can only be challenged by reforms, revolutions etc. Since such old thoughts are laid upon the society from years, it requires a revolt to bring out positive changes in society. Such outcome is only possible through conflicts. For example, the Indian independence movement which eventually led Brtish government to grant freedom to Indians in a perfect example that the conflict is vital for good social reforms.
Also, in personal life, we all have to face struggle to survive and to be successful in our life. Undoubtedly, without struggle, our life would be pale and will lack adventure. Since, struggle, fight to be always superior in such competitive world is the part and parcel of the life, we have to learn to live with it. Just accepting the prosaic ideology will never be fruitful. Conflict, revolt etc is the only way to improve in life and lead and good and desired life and change the world.
In summary, conflict is been responsible for changing the ill notion, practices all over the world and has led to the change the direction of the world. Also as said above, conflicts only improves us as a person helps us to withstand the competitivness all over the world. To end this topic, I can just write what Darwin has said: "The strongest will survive". This statement is only justified when we have the rebel alive in us.