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Xnkr wrote:
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Hi,

First of all create a single post for every essay and tag it accordingly. Thank you

Back to your essays the are quite good and linear. In the first one a bit redundant, repeating the word "student" at the beginning of the sentences.

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Sorry about the post, Will follow that from now on.
Thank you for your feedback.
How much would you rate it from 0 to 6? and what can I do to remove that redundancy ?


I would say 3.5/4

Fr redundancy you can avoid it using synonyms instead of student or other word OR varying the length of the sentences

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Fr redundancy you can avoid it using synonyms instead of student or other word OR varying the length of the sentences


Could you please elaborate on varying the length of the sentences ? An example would be helpful. :)
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